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First Chapter Analysis

Perhaps you're not quite ready to get a full developmental edit, but you'd like to get some feedback on your first chapter. 

 

This service checks:

  • How compelling your first line and the hook are 

  • How you've introduced your main character and any supporting characters

  • How you've established your setting

  • The pace 

 

You can submit up to 3,000 words. 

£40

FAQs

Can you submit a prologue and part of the first chapter? 
Yes, as long as the total word count is under 3,000 words, you can submit a split chapter. 

Need more help? 
Contact me at erin@crackedspineediting.com

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